The random witterings of Jonathan Morris, writer.

Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Everything Put Together Falls Apart

Another blog, but this time I’ll be brief. The latest issue of Doctor Who Magazine has the shock news that next year I have another Doctor Who audio out. It’s called The Entropy Plague and features the fifth Doctor with his companions Tegan, Turlough and Nyssa. I can’t really say any more than that you can pre-order it here.

A Great Darkness is spreading over E-Space. Entropy increases. In search of a last exit to anywhere, the TARDIS arrives on the power-less planet of Apollyon, where the scientist Pallister guards the only way out – a mysterious portal. But the portal needs power to open, and the only power Pallister can draw on is the energy contained within the molecular bonds of all living tissue...

The Doctor, Nyssa, Tegan and Turlough soon learn that neither Pallister nor his ally, the space pirate Captain Branarack, will stop at murder to ensure their escape. But they're not the only menace on Apollyon. The Sandmen are coming – creatures that live on the life force; that live on death.

Death is the only way out into N-Space. Death, or sacrifice.

But whose death?

Whose sacrifice?

Monday, 22 September 2014


Another blog! This time about the recent release of The Worlds of Doctor Who, which includes an episode written by me, The Screaming Skull. The Worlds of Doctor Who commemorates fifteen years of Big Finish Doctor Who adventures, so it was quite an honour to be invited to contribute. I was there, back at the start, at the Sirens of Time launch party which I remember being downstairs in The Corner Store (so it was probably somewhere else). My main memory of the night is having a long chat with Gary Russell about writing a story for Big Finish with Sea Devils in; this may even have been when I was asked to write it. Apart from Gary, I think the only other people I knew at the party were Paul Cornell and Justin Richards (I remember reading the first few pages of Red Dawn). I was a complete newcomer to fandom back then, a bit of a Jonny no-mates. I also recall being terribly impressed and intimidated by Steven Moffat and Mark Gatiss, not daring to eavesdrop on their terribly important conversation. But maybe I’m mixing things up? It was all a long time ago, and I was very, very drunk.

Anyway, if you’d told me back then that I’d still be writing for Big Finish fifteen years later, I’d have been grateful for having someone else to talk to, but would question why your remarkable powers of prophecy weren’t being put to more constructive use. But here I am, fifteen years later, looking barely a week older, writing a story for their anniversary.

The Screaming Skull is the third part of a sequence of adventures, a story in its own right but also an episode of a longer adventure. It features the characters of Ruth Matheson and Charlie Sato, who previously appeared in the Companion Chronicles Tales from the Vault and Mastermind, and also features the return of the eponymous UNIT vault. It could be considered the third part in a ‘Vault’ trilogy but that might imply you need to have heard the first two stories to understand the third; that’s absolutely not the case. It’s only a trilogy in the sense that if you have all three stories you should probably listen to them in the right order. But you don’t even have to do that if you don’t want to.

As far as I was concerned (but in no official sense) my story would be representing the Companion Chronicles range, and there was some discussion about which companion we could use. It needed to be part of the UNIT team, I wanted to write for a companion I hadn’t written for before, so I suggested using Mike Yates, as his life after Doctor Who hadn’t been explored in any great depth in previous releases. My intention with the story was to write something intimate and claustrophobic, with plenty of room for atmosphere, suspense and character. I’d been watching a lot of episodes of Brian Clemens’ Thriller around the same time so I suspect that may have rubbed off.

Unfortunately I can’t really tell you any more without spoiling any surprises there may or may not be. Having attended the recording and listened to the finished release, I can tell you it sounds terrific, I’m absolutely delighted with it, and Daphne Ashbrook and Yee Jee Tso give their best performances yet. And Jamie Glover is spine-chilling as the sinister Mr Rees. At the recent Big Finish Day convention I signed a few copies and the box set looks stunning. I couldn’t be more proud to be a part of it.

And that’s the one thing that hasn’t changed in the last fifteen years. I was so thrilled and excited to be asked by Gary Russell to write that Sea Devil story way back then, and that feeling hasn’t diminished, I still feel as thrilled and excited to be asked to write stories now. And I was so proud of the finished product, seeing the CD sleeve with my name on it, and listening to the actors, director, sound designer and incidental music composer bringing my words to life, and that’s as true now as it was then too. So proud to be working for Big Finish, and so grateful to be asked.

The Worlds of Doctor Who can be ordered here.

Saturday, 20 September 2014

Keep Your Head Up

It’s been a while since I last blogged. I blame life, it has a habit of getting in the way. Particularly the work bits and the family bits and the going out with friends watching telly reading books and listening to music bits. I hope you’re not too upset. Just slightly upset.

Anyway, I should plug all the things I’ve had released since I last blogged. Yes, I’m that bad at self-promotion, I neglect even to plug my stuff.

So, out in July was a collection I script-edited called Breaking Bubbles and Other Stories. My job for this one was to find three new writers to Doctor Who audio (as Nev Fountain had already been commissioned). I’m very proud with the three new writers I found (I’ve blogged about it before here). In my experience, it is surprisingly difficult to find new writers who can do Doctor Who. What you’re looking for is someone with writing experience, ideally who has had a dramatic or comedic script performed on a professional basis. You need someone with a professional attitude (i.e. someone who sees writing as a first or second career and not just as a hobby, because the life of a working writer is one of tight deadlines, painful notes and last-minute rewrites, and not everybody has the right mindset to cope with that. You don’t want someone who thinks they’re a genius who refuses to change a single word). And once you have found promising candidates, you have to get them on board; you need to contact them, discuss the brief, then they need time to come up with ideas that will work, and work out if they can fit it into their schedule. Not everybody says ‘yes’, and not everybody who would like to say ‘yes’ can say ‘yes’, and not everybody who does say ‘yes’ can come up with a workable idea. But the whole point of the exercise is to find fresh voices (which can come from anywhere), and I’m very proud that Breaking Bubbles and Other Stories did that, and that Nev produced a stunning, ingenious and deeply moving story too. I would love to be able to take more of the credit.

Breaking Bubbles and Other Stories can be ordered here.

I had two Doctor Who audios out in August. The first was released as part of The Fifth Doctor Box Set and was called Psychodrome. I blogged about it before here. If you’ve heard it, you’ll know that it has quite a high-concept science fiction idea at its heart. I wanted to write a Big Dumb Object-type story like Rendezvous with Rama and had been reading about Dyson spheres, structures of such vast power they can summon up any object on demand. As I said in my earlier blog, it was a tribute to the sci-fi-stylings of Christopher H Bidmead so would have to be Proper Science Fiction. But I expect he’d hate it!

The two other inspirations for the story were, firstly, my fan boy frustration with Castrovalva. Now Castrovalva is a poetic, strange, and wonderfully imaginative story but it is also (like all Doctor Who of its era) emotionally constipated. This is a story where Nyssa and Tegan have barely met, they’ve both recently suffered huge, traumatic emotional losses, but where instead of discussing any of that, they talk about recursion! Adric is barely in the story, so we never get to explore how he feels about being faced with a new Doctor. The next story, Four to Doomsday, has the Doctor and his companions acting like old friends, so there seems to be a character beat missing. Or at least a gap where a story could be told, where the Doctor and his companions get to know each other and take stock.

And secondly, a few years ago there was a music fad where tracks would be ‘mashed up’, the vocal line of one song to the chords of another, that sort of thing. I’m not claiming to be with-it, this was several years ago. But I noticed that a lot of the stories during the beginning of Adric’s run as a companion, from Full Circle to Castrovalva, shared a lot of common themes and elements, such as crashed spaceships that must never take off, or medieval societies that were once highly advanced but have now fallen into a state of decay. And bad guys with beards. So I thought about telling a story that would be a ‘mash-up’ of all those adventures; not using anything specific, keeping it vague, but that was one of my other starting points. One day if I get really bored I may explain the rationale behind the various character names.

The Fifth Doctor Box Set can be ordered here.

Also out in August was Revenge of the Swarm. Now, maybe as a reaction against Psychodrome, which I’d written a month or so earlier, with this story I wanted to have fun with a capital F. I’m a strong believer that what you put into a story is what other people get out, and so I put in sheer delight and laughter and, above all, my admiration for the story The Invisible Enemy. I wanted to write a story in that world, in the Bob Baker and Dave Martin style (where science fiction is wild fantasy with technological trappings). I wanted to juxtapose different eras, mix up the 70s, the 80s, the 90s and the present, in a fun way. And also, because I felt that endings were my weak spot when it came to stories, to plot it all out in detail and deliver an exciting, tightly-plotted ending. And, because the last few ‘Hex’ stories had been very angsty, and his final story would be very angsty, to do something light and ‘sci-fi’ by way of contrast. That’s what I was aiming for.

Now, it would be fair to say that the story has met with mixed reviews. It’s sorely tempting to go through all the bad reviews, point by point, and explain why they’re wrong, but I’m not going to do that. The customer may not always be right but if they’ve spent £15 on a story they are bloody entitled to moan if they didn’t enjoy it! All I can say to those people is, I’m sorry, and I’m annoyed too, it’s very annoying to have written something to put a grin on people’s faces and for it to fall flat. It’s what I imagine it must be like to be a comedian dying on stage. To be honest, maybe I should have expected that reaction given that some people don’t share my love for The Invisible Enemy.

But two brief thoughts. The story has been criticised for being too traditional, maybe too close to The Invisible Enemy. That’s a fair criticism, but inevitable as I wanted to write a story that didn’t just bring back the Nucleus of the Swarm but which also revisited the world seen in The Invisible Enemy. I could have reinvented the Nucleus as a dark, serious, psychological, credible villain, but what would be the point? If I was going to do that, I might as well create a new monster and avoid paying royalties. The appeal of the story for me was to have fun with the idea that this is a monster that knows it looks like a ‘pathetic crustacean’ and have fun with that. A monster motivated by an inferiority complex, determined to prove it was a proper Big Bad.

The other criticism is that the story doesn’t do anything new. Now, I refute this. I feel very strongly that every story I write has to do something that’s never been done before, otherwise there would be no point in writing it (and writing it would be a thoroughly miserable exercise). And with Revenge of the Swarm my idea for an innovation was to tell a story that was both a prequel and a sequel, and which would re-contextualize the story it was prequelizing/sequelizing. My inspiration was The Godfather Part II. My idea was to tell a story in two halves, first half prequel, second half sequel, but which also works as a continuous story in its own right. This is certainly something that’s never been done before in Doctor Who, or anywhere else to my knowledge, not in films, not in books.

But, as I said earlier up the page, the customer is entitled to their opinion, and all I can ask is that they try to avoid using words like ‘lazy’ in reviews because I’ve just checked the files and half the ‘date modified’s show that I was saving the word files at half twelve in the morning (after sitting down to work at nine o’clock in the morning). You may love the story, you may hate it, but I put as much time and effort into writing it as I put into Psychodrome and every other script.

Revenge of the Swarm can be ordered here.

Moving on. I also script-edited the other story in The Fifth Doctor Box Set, Iterations of I. I don’t remember very much about doing it, John Dorney’s first draft was excellent so all I had to do was nit-pick. After that, I script-edited the two seventh Doctor stories that followed Revenge of the Prawn; Mask of Tragedy  by James Goss and Signs and Wonders by Matt Fitton. Again, both stories were pretty much there in the first draft, all I had to do was make a few suggestions, and try to make everything fit together seamlessly. Which I almost did. You know how, when someone gets married and changes their name, they sometimes still sign cheques with their old name, out of habit? That.

Although I really can’t claim any credit, I’m very, very proud of all three stories I script-edited, they were all very good to begin with and (at best) I made them slightly better. John Dorney’s story is a genuinely terrifying ghost story with proper mind-bending maths, James Goss’ story is an hilarious, clever, dizzyingly imaginative historical romp which will teach you facts, and Signs and Wonders is a dark, epic, apocalyptic, Nigel Kneale-ish finale. My only significant contribution to that was to get Matt to rewrite the ending three times until it made me cry.

Mask of Tragedy can be ordered here.

Signs and Wonders can be ordered here.

So that’s what I’ve been up to... not including The Screaming Skull which came out last week as part of The Worlds of Doctor Who box set. And The Entropy Plague which has just been announced. Have to save them for the next blog!

Friday, 20 June 2014

The Boy In The Bubble

After reading the excellent interview with m’colleague Simon Guerrier here, I was reminded that, just as he had originally written his Destiny of the Doctor adventure Shadow of Death to feature a cameo from the eleventh Doctor (the Matt Smith one), I’d done the same with my story in the same series, Babblesphere (previously blogged about here).

When I wrote the first draft, I was under the impression that each story would be introduced by the eleventh Doctor. So this is how he might’ve introduced mine:

Stop! Pay attention! And please put that thing down! Yes, that thing you’re pretending not to look at, that thing you’re secretly tapping-away-on when you think nobody’s looking. Because I need you to listen to what happened to me a few regenerations ago, when I was travelling with Romana. The posh one. Well, all the Romanas were posh. The one who looked a bit like the blonde one out of ABBA. That one. Anyway, when I was travelling with her, we went to this planet where the whole secretly-tapping-when-you-should-be-paying-attention thing had got completely out of hand. In fact, the situation had become so desperate there was only one person in the whole cosmos who could possibly save the day. No, not Romana. Me!


And this is what his cameo at the end would’ve been like. It’s a bit of a spoiler so maybe click away now if you haven’t heard it. Most of this dialogue was used as direct speech in the story.


Hello there! Sorry about dropping in on you like this, realise you’ve got your hands full and all that, but – ooh, Romana! Haven’t seen you for ages! This takes me back! When I had the hair and the mad, scary eyes! And the scarf and the coat with all the capacious pockets. Those were the days! The Nimon, Vesuvius, Zodaal and Scaroth, the last of the Jagaroth! Anyway, where was I? Oh yes. Important. You’re about to knock out the computer thing. Well, just to ask that you don’t actually destroy it. If you could stick it somewhere safe, then I’ll remember where you put it, and pick it up later. Don’t forget where you put it, or I won’t know where to find it! Now if I recall correctly, which I think do, I was in the process of overwhelming the computer thing with a barrage of pointless facts. So just to help you out, I’ll throw some of my own into the mix. Top five monsters! Number five, Ice Warriors. Ice Warriors are cool. Literally. That’s why they’re cool. Number four, has to be the Ood. Number three, the Mandrils. Number two, the Bandrils. And number one, bit of a surprise, the Chumblies! There, I think that may just have tipped the balance!

Friday, 13 June 2014

Lovers (Live A Little Longer)

Ooh, it’s been almost a month since my last blog. Well, I’ve been busy, writing things, script-editing things, moving house, plus occasionally looking after the little chap. And messing about on twitter. I may have even read a couple of books. It’s been ‘all go’.

Anyway. I have two things out now! A book and an audio. Audio first.

It’s Exodus, the second instalment in the 4-part Survivors box set released by Big Finish. The series is probably best described as a companion piece to the original 1975 BBC TV series. It’s not a remake, or a continuation, it’s what-was-happening-to-some-other-characters-over-the-hill. But with characters from the BBC TV series turning up as well. So it’s an expansion of that series, but entirely accessible to anyone who has never seen that series. The premise is simple. A superbug wipes out a huge percentage of the human race in a matter of days; what happens to the people who are left?

Exodus is set in the immediate aftermath of the plague. It’s one of the things that bugs me with other post-apocalyptic stories that they tend to skip this bit; usually by having a viewpoint character get rendered unconscious only to wake up ’28 Days Later’ or whenever (The Day of the Triffids does it, The Walking Dead does it, even The Last Train did it, yes, I went there, I mentioned The Last Train). When it’s the immediate aftermath which, in many ways, is the most dramatic moment. It’s when civilisation is falling apart and when the survivors are first coming to terms with what has happened, when they’re still in a state of shock, or denial. It’s when the world from ‘before’ the plague is still present all around them, so you have that jarring, eerie discomfiture.

That’s what excited me about this story. And that it’s near the beginning of the series, so you don’t know who will live and who will die, where the characters are still be established. Writing it was a real step outside my comfort zone, partly because the subject matter is so uncomfortable, so unrelentingly grim and serious, but also because the way the story was told; often in writing you write several steps removed from reality, in a world where nobody goes to the toilet, nobody forgets what they went into the kitchen for, and where everybody is on top form, but with Survivors that wouldn’t work. The whole point of the premise is to be as realistic as possible, to tell the story in as naturalistic, straightforwardand honest a way as possible. Without the writer intruding by drawing attention to themselves, to let the characters tell the story. Because Survivors is such a powerful, gut-grabbing idea, it doesn’t need narrative tricks to maintain interest.

It’s turned out incredibly well. The director, sound designer and cast have taken what I wrote and amplified it, made it even more emotionally affecting, more shocking, more tense. Which is lovely, because it makes me look good. I’m particularly pleased with Louise Jameson’s performance as Jackie Burchall, a character I created specifically for her. She does a stunning job (as expected). But the whole cast are very strong, everything gels, and so far the series seems to have gone down exceptionally well. People are saying it’s one of the best things Big Finish have ever done. Wow.

So please, rush and out buy it, it’s available from here. I think there’s going to be a second series.

The book out now is an odd little thing. Doctor Who: The Shakespeare Notebooks. It’s a humour book designed for fans of both Doctor Who and Shakespeare. Well, it hasn’t been done before! It’s written by James Goss, Julian Richards, Justin Richards, Matthew Sweet and me, with additional material by William Shakespeare.

I found the process of writing it fun but arduous; I made a rod for my own back by deciding that my ‘pastiches’ of Shakespeare would be written in iambic pentameter blank verse (except for low-status characters  in verse, and a few rhyming couplets). Which meant that I was not just checking the number of syllables but the stresses of every word; whenever in doubt, checking it against a searchable online index of Shakespeare to see where he had placed the same word in blank verse in order to see where the stresses went, and to check that the word was one in his vocabulary. So a meticulous, time-consuming task, but a rewarding one. I’m not claiming my attempts at blank verse are prefect (they wouldn’t sound authentically Shakespearean if they were, he knew better than to be beholden to rules) but I gave it a damn good go.

So please, rush out and buy it, if only to find all the bits I got wrong. My bits are some missing scenes from Macbeth, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern-style, which recasts it as a Troughton historical; Romeo and Juliet with a happy ending in the style of a Steven Moffat season finale (everyone lives!); A Midsummer Night’s Dream with Sontarans on Vortis; and Shakespeare’s rough notes for The Tempest.  All beautifully illustrated by Mike Collins.

You can read the first 30-odd pages at the Random House website. As another taster, here’s part of the new Romeo and Juliet:

Act V, Scene III – Capulet tomb in the Verona churchyard

Romeo has discovered Juliet lying on an altar in the tomb He reaches for the vial of poison. Doctor, Amy, Rory appear from behind the altar.

Romeo, stop!  Don’t drink the poison’d brew!
For if thou dost thou shalt regret the deed
As long as thou shalt live; which won’t be long
But that is not the point. The point is this;
Thy Juliet is not dead yet; she lives!

I see no breath, her cheeks are pale, her lips
Are cold as stone. My love is dead, so taunt
Me not; I am resolv’d to die. But wait.
Who are you that dares violate the tomb
Of Capulet? And what is this blue box
That is not of this place?

                                    We will explain
That later on.

                        Just put that vial down.
You heard the Doctor’s words. Your Juliet
Just counterfeits death’s signs. She slumbers deep
But will soon wake to find you here. And would
You wish she found you dead at her bed-side?
As consequence of feigned death? What would
She do in such a state of discontent?

I dare not think.

                         She would do something rash
Like take your dagger and do herself in.

And would not that be a grave tragedy?

A tragedy forg’d of a grave misdeed,
Within a grave itself is grave indeed.